You walked along my path,
i thought you were walking with me.
Your voice was muffled amongst the crowd,
i thought you called my name aloud.
You whizzed past ahead of me,
i stood there waiting for you to look back.
You would never hurt a soul i believed,
i did let you hurt me indeed.
You make way in my life again,
it has been ages since then.
You would never feel the way i do,
beneath the smile,the pain is subdue.
You make pieces fall in place again,
i travel the memory lane to trace you in fain.
You make me want to dream again,
i try to walk away in vain.
You would never know how long the pain lasts,
but i would not mist my eyes now from the smoke of the past.
Wednesday, July 8, 2009
SMOKE OF THE PAST...
Posted by sana at Wednesday, July 08, 2009
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3 comments:
ending's very good :-) as usual (eh!)
Sweet.
very touchy,deeply felt.presented in a wonderful way,can't find words to xpress.
shud it b 'subdued'? plz gv sm hints,i cud nt gt the intention of "pieces in place"line.
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